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~Zack Tildus~ Fanfiction by Aldaris

Judicator Aldaris CA

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flamer#618 (US)

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Dec 2nd 2009, 16:05
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The Setting of this fan fiction takes place in a unknown world, A pilot named "Zack Tildus" had crashed landed on this unknown planet. It is deserted, Unknown, And he has not seen any type of lifeforms.. Yet.
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Book One
---------Mid Problem-Chapter 1

The blazing sun swooped in un-noticed, Zack had been stranded on the unknown planet in a sector known as "Cocoon". It was yesterday, Zack had suffered amensia and had no clue why he was here.
The only bit he could remember was something in his pocket, It was a ticket to something.
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Course -------------l~
One --------------l~
Admission For One!------l~
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It was ripped off on the side, As you can see. That means it was for multiple people since it might of been for a fair or some ride, This we will find out later.

Zack's ship was a blue very square ship, Almost like the little buggys used to drive around in gold courses, But more covered and flyable.

It, Fortunalty had supplies that could last a while, Zack had no communication to anyone or any other type of source.
"Damnit to hell!" said Zack, He picked up his rachet and flinged it at his ship, The repair was no success.
Zack laid down and started sobbering, The planet was red, With yellow pitched sky's and no water.
"Why?!" yelled Zack out to the heavens, No memory of why he was here, The only thing he could remember was before he set off in his ship, But none said of where or what he was going to.

Weeks later...


"Need Food.." groaned Zack, His supply crates had run out. The only thing he had left was water, He was so desperate he took two rocks and put them together and splashed water on it and attempted to eat it, Although this obviously failed.

Zack had dug deep into his ship, He had known that he was going to be stuck here forever and his ship was not going to help him expect mabye shelter. He had taken the ship apart vigoriously and used many parts for weapons, As well as armour incase of attack, And other use's.

He had found a hidden .12 calibur in his seat, He stored it away quickly as he knew that it wasn't needed, His iron pipes could be used to bash animals.


Zack was running into a mid problem, It was the middle of his strand here, And his food and water were completely gone. The only source he could rely on was scorpian's and his own piss. These two things were dangerous already, But it was his only chance of staying alive.

While Zack was sleeping in his detatched ship, A noise could be heard. Bushes rattled as if a rattle snake was inside, Although no snakes lived here. Sweat beaded down his forehead, His hair on his neck rose, And his ship shake and he shook. He jumped out with his .12 calibur pistol.

+++++++++++++++++++++++++To Be Continued!+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

Written by Aldaris, Full of plot holes and things that make no sense! Also, The ticket for some reason is messed up, It looks fine on my posting box thingy.... I will try to fix it!~
While me and trib were in a 2v2
Me: Hey trib, what terran strat should I use?
Trib: m&m
I DIED FIVE MINUTES IN AND THEY WERE THE BEST M&M'S EVER

sc2releasehound

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Dec 2nd 2009, 16:14
This looks very good and a interesting mystery with lots of foreshadowing! wonder whats going to happen. is this set in the starcraft universe or in another one?
would you kindly read this fanfiction?
cracks in the glass

Judicator Aldaris CA

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Dec 2nd 2009, 16:17
Starcraft universe.
And thank you!

I love foreshadowing!
While me and trib were in a 2v2
Me: Hey trib, what terran strat should I use?
Trib: m&m
I DIED FIVE MINUTES IN AND THEY WERE THE BEST M&M'S EVER

Judicator Aldaris CA

Broodling
924 posts

Pet 2,004
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Character:
flamer#618 (US)

Standing: Troll

Dec 2nd 2009, 17:48
New chapter up tomorrow!
While me and trib were in a 2v2
Me: Hey trib, what terran strat should I use?
Trib: m&m
I DIED FIVE MINUTES IN AND THEY WERE THE BEST M&M'S EVER